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Goodbye
My last glimpse of happiness
passing by in a flash
My new world of hopelessness
Every corner I crash
My memory of a past complete soul
fading with each day
My emotions spinning out of control
Sight not worth the stay
My sunlight just a few roads behind
diminished to cold darkness
My outlook a bit less than kind
forces me to confess
My everything was established
within the eyes of my past flame
My faith was soon abolished
the eyes closed and I became
My own custom-made departure
Lost within the depth of
My desperate need for closure
and my longing for his love
You have a superb ability to write and express yourself. A writer who has the talent of putting ones self into everything that they write, so that each poems reflects who they are, is a great quality to possess. It is obvious that you are a very intelligent and bright girl, keep up the awesome work!
ps. Although a felt a connection to all of your poems, I very much related to this one.
Fondly,
Angela