Who's There?

I heard a knock at the door today

But I didn't open up.

I just laid on the floor

And counted the tiles on the ceiling.

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ashes_twisted's picture

Oh,

now this is gold.

Short, simple, but leaves the reader wondering:

 

"Was she hurt?"

"Is she depressed?"

"Was she slowly succumbing to her death?"

"Simply bored, and too lazy to move?"

 

Ugh!

Love. <3

^-^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Hyperbolical_fop's picture

Why thank you, I think it's

Why thank you, I think it's my favorite that I've written so far. I'm starting to change my style.