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I Miss You

I never thought I'd miss you

but I continually find myself thinking of you and wanting to walk those five steps to your room

I miss begging you to make me a coke

I miss your weird smelling hair gel

I miss you never emptying the trashcan

I miss your funky style

I miss your bathroom dances

I miss your turquoise necklace

I miss your two, crooked bottom teeth

I miss you

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©30 September 2001 - 3:51am — hushbaby
15 October 2003 - 10:14am — Shell Trees (not verified)
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liked this one lol nice...shells

14 October 2003 - 8:23pm — gentle
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And why not speak of love after it is gone. It is sometimes all we have.

Right to the point & well said.

Amy

Gentle is the night♥

13 October 2003 - 3:20pm — Carissa Janelle (not verified)
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Okay, this really made me cry. As I read it, I thought more and more of my sisters, who I knew I'd miss when I left, but didn't think I'd miss quite this much. Lovely write.

*hugs*

~CJ~

2 September 2003 - 1:54am — mar
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WOw, hahahah. this poem made me laugh. Sounds so sweet. I like it.
Have a nice and beautiful life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~My Best Wishes~

16 October 2003 - 8:53pm — mar
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Wow, so simple and meaningful. "I miss u" I like the tittle. Good poem.
Have a nice and beautiful life!!!!!!!!!!!
~My Best Wishes~
:)

27 November 2003 - 6:38am — poetjewnita
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i am sorry that i am keeping it short but i would like to say a little something about all your poems.