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"CONTROL"
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SultryRose's Signatures
Control is an issue you can't control.
You want control, I want control.
You say you love me, I see trappment.
You trap me in your words and
I trap you in my doings.
Which is right and who is wrong.
Two wrongs don't make a right.
There is the control for the desire
to control, to control me and me
to contol you.
Yet we are both out of control.
We both hurt each others hearts,
we step on each others spirits.
We are sadden by the loss to have
control.
The power to control has its penelties,
who gets hurt.
The both of us.
Control of others, someday,
Control of others, someday, perhaps will be taught to be the greatest 'sin'. Spoken of properly, perhaps we could learn earlier, before being controlled by the desire to control. Also, we must learn that, it's illusury in most cases - especially in relationships. Well written and said.
The poem is great,
I guess control is just a human nature,
Everyone will always want control of atleast one thing.
Its an awesome poem.
Oh one small detail on the first line you wrote a issue
its supposed to be an issue.
Great job keep it up.