Cleansing the Soul

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Water

I can see threw it

Like a crystal ball

So clean like rain

Such purity and innocence

I stand in the rain for hours

Washing away my sins, my fears, my troubles

Now I am pure

As clean as the rain

And you can see threw me

You can see my heart, my body, my soul

I am as pure as a goddess

And then I drink the water

Author's Notes/Comments: 

the rain, the rain.....

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Pete Trevino's picture

You should submit some work to SpitjawReview! After all, I AM the editor!

Goddess_of_darkness -'s picture

i love this poem. it was written well. not many people can pull off a short poem and have it read well. great job. i love the rain and everything about it...keep up the good work.