YESTERDAY A MEMORY

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POEMS FOR MY BOOK

YESTERDAY A MEMORY

 Stepping
 back
in time.

Allowing
my
mind to
wander.

 

I
remember
yesterday.

Your
presence
was so
welcome,
always
encouraging.

 

Believing
in my
every
effort.

 

Pushing
to
greater
heights.

 

Touching
minds
with you.

 

Taught me
greater
depths.

copyright  by heather burns

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Fragments

I am trying to get a handle on your style, but I get fragments...valid, yes, yours, yes, but simply saying is great prose "touching mind with you" I got lost here - Lady A


 

 

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hello dear allets, I change

hello dear allets, I change my style from time to time.  I break my sentences diffferently from time to time to get the feel to my words I want.  Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. take care heather