WHISPERING PROMISES

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A COMING TOGETHER

Whispering promises, is easy to

do,

Many times, they never come

true.



The one whispering promises,

Is not sincere.

Playing make-believe with

your ear.



Lots of voices, hum a tune

Whispering promises forgotten

soon



Truth is absent, from the start,

A game of words, played with a

heart.



Lying tongues have a cruel

bite,

Whispered promises, in the

night.

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dyingpoetkr's picture

I also love this poem....I love the line "cruel bite". I love your poetry it's really good.

Afzal Shauq's picture

sooo romantic one... wow, its knocking the door of my heart and says ..hello shauq.. miss you to talk.. yeah I realize like it..the whispering way is really very loving way and like it... when two talks ear to ear ..and exchange love ... love this poem very much

Imagery's picture

To be honest i've always felt

To be honest i've always felt rhyming poems were too .. hmm in a word.. invalid. But yours is very very appealing to me.  I love it.