stars appeared in an exhale


After a while, her breath slowed...


so slow...


She could count to 23...

then hold for 23...

then exhale for 23...

then hold for 17..


She couldn't make it past 17.


On that exhale, she got scared

and retreated...

with a long inhale...


And as she did, 

the whole universe opened up

to show her dieties....


But she couldn't tell which ones

for their faces

kept changing their forms...


She wanted to explore,

and stay in that world...

'til the ground reminded

to come back down.



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eternalpoet1389's picture

Another great one-you have

Another great one-you have sooooooooooooooooooooo many!!!

Morningglory's picture

Thanks a lot! I wish I liked

Thanks a lot! I wish I liked them as much. lol.  Though I must admit, I'm kinda fond of this one too. :) Thanks for reading my ramblings! 

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nightlight1220's picture

Shared. I love this one. I

Shared. I love this one. I the moment all of our work is done here on Earth, is when we let go of the fear...for that is when we will be gently summoned by the universe, that there is no longer a need for it.


Absolutely loved this.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


gra8mind's picture

master piece

i love this

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