My First Time

My first time was nothing that

i thought it would be

it was sinful yet i wanted


i craved for every ounce

of emotion that i was expieriencing

Each new line a new feeling like

a tidal wave of sensations

and then i wrote again

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John Strugnell's picture

great immagery, and play on words. You have the ability to make others feel what you do when you write. an exceptional talent. Keep it up friend.