Imagine

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Confusing thoughts

setting here wondering

wondering whats on my mind

deciding if i'm wasting

wasting all my time



do i love him?

is this that strong

a confusing love

with emotions that may be wrong



controlling

pressured feelings uncontrolled

smothering

pull away with a stronger hold



imagining

imagine how it will be

trying

try to see it as a fantasy



wanting

but do i want this?

thinking

thoughts of things i've missed



forgetting

i forgot what was on my mind

remembering

remembering it's a waste of time

Author's Notes/Comments: 

a poem i wrote about my feelings at the time with the guy i used to be with.

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winny's picture

Hey... Your poem is amazing. In all honesty this poem is probably one of the best poems that I can relate too. Great job

Robin's picture

r we wasting time?

Matt Handlos's picture

i suppose in some ways it was a waste of time at that time, but at least you learned how you felt in the end, and that life sometimes serves you liver when you want steak

Karyn Indursky's picture

This is very powerful and deep. You play with words leaving and beginning with the same word for emphasis and effort. It works very well. I can see myself as you in that I've often wandered if having fantasies, dreams, and stuff that doesn't seem feasible are a waste of my time. I've wandered many things and still often do. I go back and forth with my wandering like your poem does with certain words. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of it by you.