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For Me
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Confusing thoughts Satisfy my temptations
relax my satisfaction
the tempt that I make
the trip that I take
the way you fake
you're so great
Concentrate on me
only
penetrate for somebody
only me
Multiply my words
for something good to say
until my body turns
there is something I did
or I might do someday
Of course this one is well written - this is jenny your talking about=)
Very well written, good structure. You also did pretty well working the rhyming into it, something not every poet can do