Amongst the fields of sands

 


The cold wind blows rustling my leaves

through a winters stare and frost like touch.

Darkness hides from the light of the son,

too much to do and not enough done.

Grace never given and promises unfold

stories are broken and dreams awoken.

My branches are heavy but not with my fruit,

my roots grip steady but not under foot

who will give an old beggar dressed in all black?

Who will oil a wheel that turns without fault?

To what can I dream of when fully awake?

Now all is forgiven for heavens sake 

but not my own time can I find.

Always and never whispers and glares

never and sometimes spoken and looks.

Who am I but a man

growing old

a solitary oak in a midst a forest of sand.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

If an oak stands alone in a forest and there are no firs to hear it, does it still fall? 

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a.griffiths57's picture

    A brooding poem, very

 

 

A brooding poem, very stark imagery, well written and a good read.


 

 

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grimfate's picture

Thankyou

I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, it is one of my favorites and a step away from lyrics and full rhyming verse.


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.