Its deceiving

There's this guy who loves me

Not sure, that's he told thee

We talk all night until three

Then I felt my heart in glee

 

He said to me 'I love you.'

Followed by his 'I miss you.'

I dont know if its true

I believed with few words cue.


I know its me to blame

Why my heart cries in pain

I put myself in a game

That left nothing but a stain

Author's Notes/Comments: 

did this on the spot. i want to add more but i remembered i have stuffs to do so i ended it. i'll continue it maybe when im not bc anymore

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TOUNDE's picture

Well, i love the poem even if

Well, i love the poem even if it is not more than this. whati cherished most is the rhyme scheme of it. keep flowing...

 

greySHIon's picture

thank you. well i just want

thank you. well i just want to express what i feel these days so i wrote one. im not really good but thanks