Over

a chopped off head
and a half cooked bread
the floor is covered in red
brains blew out
someone screams and shout
but no one can hear it
over the sound of the parade
,
she said in a quiet sound
good bye you dirty clown
and disappeared in grey
they found him on the ground
the kid is the witness now
and there's nothing he can say
,

Author's Notes/Comments: 

does this even make any sense?

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allets's picture

Reminds Me Of

the scene in the Godfather when DeNiro (worth 350 million now) uses the sound of the parade to mask the gun shot before he robs the fat cat one time "don". He fades to gray sort of. No one knows who done it. If a kid saw as witness, no telling is possible out of fear. Beheaded may be a bit extreme for a woman. Poison is a woman's tool or a gun or a bat. A skilet works too - It makes lots and lots of sense perhaps an empty wallet instead of bread. - Im' Just Bein' Lady A

 

 


 

 

GOHIL48's picture

wow! I am really going to

wow! I am really going to watch the movie now! I seriously don't know what I wrote and you just put sense in it! you are awesome !! :D

allets's picture

Ego Impaired

I practice awesome in the mirror
my ends begin with the middle
life takes my example
poets would adore me
but they pause, unsure
if such ego is allowable
in the ethical systems of the head
and the heart beats wrong
when preaching comes at them
from the pen of an altruistic
self-absorbed idiot trying
to find her place in the world.

Lady A
11-12-14
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GOHIL48's picture

that was beautiful

that was beautiful <3