Unspoken Thoughts

I would write a book
if words were enough to describe
the situation that I'm placed in
here nothing seems to go right.
Imagination is the only way
to get distracted for a while.
When pavement is hard to stay on
when you are on a messy aisle.
Sometimes it gets hard
in this world where should you look at
when all the hopes falls apart
every possibility is crooked.
To overcome for the last time
I must bounce back in game and win
but the player in me is paralyzed
overdose of your love is the medicine.
But the brutal truth is
doctor is on a vacation.
Before i turn to the drugs again
got to find another prescription.
So don't forget me
I can't hide it.
So my friend come again
and get me excited.
Sorry, sometimes I use
lyrics to describe it
but Anthony's a genius
To dig the truth where the lies hid.
Staying on the topic we started
the thing that I learned yet on my way
is fortune is for all same
Sometime you have to sail away.
Then why my heart keeps spurning it?
Why still my ambitions is to get you?
And why the future is unknown?
Well, here is a little truth.
Life is a car, God is the driver
you are nothing but a passenger here.
You know where your heart wants to go
and he knows the best way to get you there.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Only if somebody doesn't know, Anthony is lead singer of the band 'Red Hot Chili Peppers'.. I stole a couple of lines from the song ''Don't Forget Me''

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Astral_Tides's picture

Your words here are like a

Your words here are like a droplet to me.

Slowly, gently finding the only route of gravitys noose.

Impacts like that of a timeline.

Each new landing has something to say.

And they all have become of equal stature.

Thanks for sharing that path.




"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.



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I really appreciate that,

I really appreciate that, thank you :)
sometimes good poems write themselves, we just have to hold the pen

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WOW! AWESOME POEM                                                                                                                                                                                                      LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!Laughing

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Thanks :D

Thanks :D

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haha i just read that! thanks

haha i just read that! thanks for sharing

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Life is a car, God is the driver

Loved the last four lines, loved the tribute to Anthony - not a red hot chili pepper's fan so I do not know the quotes - The line "...God is the driver" is a nice line. ~Lady A~



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Thank you:) and the song

Thank you:) and the song lyrics are ''don't forget me, I can't hide it, come again get me excited''