Melting Mascara

She was standing alone,
On the otherside of road.
I was on the otherside,
She had some strange vibes.
The dark sky was crying,
And so her eyes..
But the melting mascara,
It never lies..
,,
She was standing unknown,
On that night so cold.
A widow who used to be a bride,
I could hear her heart cry.
And my mind was lying,
That she's alright.
But the melting mascara
It never lies
,,
Who else could see it?
No one noticed her, but me.
People running helter skelter,
I was frozen, looking at her.
And she was falling,
But handled herself nice.
But the melting mascara,
It never lies.
,,
On her wrist, signs of slits,
That was so hard to see.
I could only pray for her,
To god to wash her slur...
A kid by her side and she was smiling,
Like a beautiful sunrise.
But the melting mascara,
It never lies.

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SSmoothie's picture

Some good powerful imagery! I

Some good powerful imagery! I like where yu were going with this! Well done, 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

GOHIL48's picture

thank you:)

thank you:)

nightlight1220's picture

Very nice. Enjoyed the

Very nice. Enjoyed the reading and feeling empathetic towards the melting mascara.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

GOHIL48's picture

hehe, thanks alot:) never

hehe, thanks alot:) never thought people will like it this much :)

bishu's picture

Wow Rajveer That was really a good one

Wow Rajveer That was really a good one


©bishu 

 

GOHIL48's picture

thanks alot sir :)

thanks alot sir :)

lovelife123's picture

Aww this is beautiful! :)

Aww this is beautiful! :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

GOHIL48's picture

haha Thanks ;D

haha Thanks ;D

allets's picture

All The Above...Plus

the melting mascara line is hauntingly fine. The poems/song lyrics you think others will not like often are the ones most liked - This one is a keeper dearest GOHIL48. ~Lady A~


 

 

GOHIL48's picture

haha yes! i think i should

haha yes! i think i should write less effort poem like this more often :p thank you btw:)