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Die Tonight
Standing together on the highest cliff
I have nothing to say and so your lips
On your wrist I can't see these signs of slits
We should end it tonight, let ourselves slip
This world won't understand, it never did
Leave them with their selfishness and greed
Close your eyes and jump. I will jump first to lead
May be our bodies will get ill
But baby our hearts will no more bleed.
Before he paints another sunrise
Before our dark world fades to light
Looking into eachother's eyes
To this world, say goodbye.. let's die tonight.
Heartbeat and Rhythm
Heartbeat and Rhythm ................ sauced with love......... Good writing .. rhyming words excellent.... Great going Gohil babu
©bishu
thanks alot bishu da :P but
thanks alot bishu da :P but im kind of cheater at rhyming... i search rhyming words on google and try to put them all in a frame
hi gohil48
this poem leaves me with the feeling of when we are exhausted from the rat race of life, without making time to smell the roses and appreciate the simple things we so often take for granted. life is so much more than what we are taught it is 'supposed to be'.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
wow.. thanks alot:) and yes
wow.. thanks alot:) and yes it is kinda about those things..
I love it :)
I love it :)
"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein
thanks ;)
thanks ;)
Fast & Tired
Immediacy happens that way - a little rewrite and voila! Sometimes tired and fast is better ~~A~~
Tanks alott !! and yeah ! i
Tanks alott !! and yeah ! i will think about that:)