Hippolytus

That night the torches 

lit up only his face,
until I was so moon-struck
and filled with him,
my bed seemed full of flames.
 
His body left long shadows 
all through the doorways of this place,
while I carried my bright heart 
in a jar, gently,
until the clay burned my hands.
 
Revealing myself in the moonlight,
why didn't he turn me
into a doe or a raven?
 
Instead he hid himself from me,
and I could only watch  
when speaking for the crown
or in the races holding
four horses in a line
 
That was the day he
blocked out the sun
until the horses bucked under
in the run,
so even in death he left me
nothing to hold--
 
and my life a burned out oil lamp,
and my body an empty cup.
 
His coldness spreads 
to the faces of the world.
The women I've known all my life 
spit when they see me,
making signs with their hands.
 
But still Phaedra sends her love 
to fair Hippolytus
in the other world,
with all the hope and happiness 
that I lack
unless he gives it me.
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Some velvet morning

by Lee Hazelwood circa !967

Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm gonna open up your gate
Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm gonna open up your gate

Flowers growing on the hill
Dragonflies and daffodils
Learn from us very much
Look at us but do not touch
Phaedra is my name

Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm gonna open up your gate
Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm gonna open up your gate

Flowers are the things we grew
Secrets are the things we knew
Learn from us very much
Look at us but do not touch
Phaedra is my name

Some velvet morning when I'm straight
I'm gonna open up your gate

 

Flowers growing on the hill

Some velvet morning when I'm straight

 

Dragonflies and daffodils

 

Your poem is  classic...

You and I as have many before us  been temped to muse

about the lure of myths

 

peace
Dylan

"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Myth Weaver

I enjoyed the images - nice - Stella