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there are a billion stars in the sky, when one fades away does anyone notice? there are a billion blades of grass, when one gets stepped on and broken does anyone care? there are a billion grains of sand that get washed away and forgotten and no one notices. but...... i'm  a star over

the grass that used to be the sand that faded away got stepped on and washed away that no one notices cares or realizes that i used to shine, stand tall and be one of billions.

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    Nice writing; the poem

 

 

Nice writing; the poem realy gives a person a sense of being lonely in an immense crowd. Liked your poem.


 

 

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