Once

Once

 

I had, everything !

But at time,

I didn't ......know.

For, I was a fool.

And now, I have nothing .

But still....want, everything.

Once 

 

More.......

 

I am envious, of those.

Who still have, the passion.

So

If I write, your name, upon......

My skin.

Would mine, then be etched, upon....

Your heart ?

 

To remain,

forever 

 

more......

 

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What Ifs

Nice twist at the end. Subtle write, the imagination soars. Without the obvious or every detail presented, the reader floats. Well said! - Lady A-