Short Fuse

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Extended Metaphors

When I was interrupted,

My fuse short-circuited.



There were overcurrents and

No protection against them.



Damage to my wires resulted

When my temper overheated.


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Beatnik1979's picture

perhaps

a surge protector is needed?

I love extended metaphors...and this one was thought provoking...well done 

Afzal Shauq's picture

omg... look at these six lines of poems and there is very big visualized story like a good film is hidden inside.. this is what making me think about your talent and thoughts... love it... very great piece...