could
use
Roman
numerals
to sound
more Biblical
& ancient
but that
twouldn’t
actualize
subdivisions
of reality
sweltering
in winter
with Arctic air
& a faltering
crucifix
of the
Tropic of Capricorn
The lantern
was extinguished
by resolution
to a higher
authority
to rise up
and hand
down the law
etched in stone
for all to see
& disobey
Whoa!
You captured the polar vortex - "for all to see & disobey" Solid finale brought home the Roman count. A metaphorical summation. U say it so well.
~S~
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thank you kindly
thank you kindly