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DARK INDIGO INK
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BUT DAD, HE'S A POET
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yet the day remains
in dark indigo ink;
the words of prophets
etched in the souls
of other humans
the tusk
of elephants;
the angels; the clouds
concealing blue sky
but over all
the game of dreams
is tantalizing;
the promise of nights
the height
of the symbol
scattering chaos
on the masses
the hopes of youth
remain ethereal
the dance off
into eternity
poem
oinched from the lyrical pocket in the heart. somebody call the style police - there's been a a break-out! I witnessed a semi-colon. "the game of dreams" especially. Enjoyed a ditty of hope. :D
I like my semicolons and my
I like my semicolons and my adverbs. Sue me if you must.
I applaud your use of them!
I applaud your use of them!
Starward
some of us still use complete
some of us still use complete words and try to use the correct punctuation--at least some of the time.
Yes. I have never felt that
Yes. I have never felt that the "telegraph" style of English does much justice to the language.
Starward