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GRASSHOPPERS; PRAYING MANTES
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DELIGHTFULLY WEIRD
Just
a few
grasshoppers;
Praying Mantes
delightful fancies
of misspent childhood
clouds prancing across the sky
worker ants ascending their hill
left deserted in false nostalgia
Dissonance Created
With "false nostalgia" - a tremulous spark exists between these ideas. Nice writing this. ~S~
false nostalgia seems to
false nostalgia seems to dominate a lot of human souls
Whimsical, clever and
Whimsical, clever and powerful illustrations of regret. The structure feels very significant, adding to a feeling of descent, of falling away from the summit of our best thoughts. Well done.
thank you, I like utilizing
thank you, I like utilizing different short styles. It lets me work on discipline and keeps me from rambling endlessly
That is a highly perceptive
That is a highly perceptive comment (as yours always are), and leaves me with nothing left to say, except that I heartily agree with your words, and I do very much admire this profound poem. To put such profound emotion into such a short space is a sign of classic talent (and I cite the great J. V. Cunninfham as my source).
Starward
thank you. I'm humbled by
thank you. I'm humbled by your praise