PAIR OF MARCH SENRYU


rolling papers 

discovered in backpack 

Lawd, it took me back   



Dress code issued 

No miniskirts, no minidress 

No word on minikilt. 




Author's Notes/Comments: 

Pair of senryu published in the March issue of Failed Haiku: an online journal of senryu:

 

http://www.haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue51.pdf?fbclid=IwAR2vjva3PwRdyjBK...

 

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allets's picture

Humor

The best medicine. : ) - S


 

 

Starward's picture

Excellent senryu!  And we all

Excellent senryu!  And we all could use more humor in this difficult time.


Starward

georgeschaefer's picture

Hmmm, didn't realize I was

Hmmm, didn't realize I was joking at the time but now I can see.

allets's picture

Senryu

Made me look up moras. 17 (or less) and if more sound units,  the development of "fractured"? Or is it due to humor or irony? I like the freedom & the name, "Human Haiku". The papers made me smile. ~S~


 

 

georgeschaefer's picture

those papers make a lot of

those papers make a lot of people smile

word_man's picture

sounds like yester

sounds like yester year,reminess 

georgeschaefer's picture

we're all getting older and

we're all getting older and we all start to look past at those glory days

word_man's picture

yeap we do

yeap we do

georgeschaefer's picture

(or not so glorious days)

(or not so glorious days)

word_man's picture

for the most part

for the most part