EBBING SUN

 

A hot ebbing sun

dances behind buildings

pink clouds dot skyline

 

a gentle wind kisses me

introducing warm evening

 

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That is perfect! Love it!  

That is perfect! Love it!

 

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thank you kindly

thank you kindly

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I agree completely---that is

I agree completely---that is how Tanka was meant to be.


Starward

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I greatly appreciate the

I greatly appreciate the praise. thank you

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Mood At Sunset

Mello Mello Mello - Lady A


 

 

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mellow yellow?  some orange

mellow yellow?  some orange and purple is peaking in