REDUNDANCY

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SLEEPY TIME POEMS

 

I’d tell you that

you look nice today

but you always look nice

so then I would 

have to tell you

that you look nice

everyday

and that would be boring.

 

My poetry

is redundant enough

as it is, already.

I can’t afford 

to be so redundant

in my everyday life, too.

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written in the late 90's.

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allets's picture

I Read You

And I believe! - actually you just tell it and to me that is good writing and good telling - slc


 

 

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well thank you much.  I have

well thank you much.  I have enjoyed your own work and your imput on my writing as well.

Teytonon's picture

Good.morning

Hahaha. Good way to start the day. Don’t think twice, it’s alright.

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If you're partial to Herr

If you're partial to Herr Zimmerman

Teytonon's picture

Yes

He used to be a nice Jewish boy. His bar mitzvah was very nice. Lousy food though.