Steady stream of feet

Clomping thru the vestibule

Sleeping guard ignores


The crowd swells beyond the cap

Fire marshals are alarmed


Author's Notes/Comments: 

more tanka

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allets's picture


would have been too many syllables? Okay. :D



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It would have.  Of course, I

It would have.  Of course, I could have been the ugly American and gone and over-syllabled the tanka anyway.  thanks for commenting.