SLEEPING GUARD

 

Steady stream of feet

Clomping thru the vestibule

Sleeping guard ignores

 

The crowd swells beyond the cap

Fire marshals are alarmed

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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allets's picture

capacity

would have been too many syllables? Okay. :D


 

 

fuche_bu's picture

It would have.  Of course, I

It would have.  Of course, I could have been the ugly American and gone and over-syllabled the tanka anyway.  thanks for commenting.