SUNSET TANKA

 

The sheer poetry

of the orange pink sunset

fading out to gray

 

a few stars peak through darkness

a prelude to the moonrise.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

jotted down notes last night.  Evening will come sooner from now on.

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allets's picture

Smooth Setting

captured and transitory. Cool writings - slc


 

 

Morningglory's picture

sounds lovely   our sunset

sounds lovely

 

our sunset was deep red last evening

it was poetic, like yours


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fuche_bu's picture

it's always nice when you're

it's always nice when you're not too busy to catch a sunrise or sunset.  thanks for reading.

Morningglory's picture

ain't that the truth

Today, i completely missed the sunset and just discovered it was really really dark all of a sudden. And way too early too!


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fuche_bu's picture

It's easy enough to miss.  I

It's easy enough to miss.  I have to deal with work schedules and the like.