SUNRISE TANKA

 

Sun slowly rising

against pink and purple sky;

clouds are luminous

 

the passage of night to day

unfolds before bleary eyes.

 

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Beautiful tanka---the

Beautiful tanka---the astronomical process set against the human experience of it!


Starward

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thank you

thank you

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The Tankaist

Very nice!


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thank you

thank you