Ethereal Mornings

On my drive to work today,

As an orange sun rose. 

I noticed an ethereal touch,

Placed upon the earth.

Clouds floated a few feet,

From my car as I drove.

 

I felt encased in love,

My father's arms around me,

From the great beyond.

 

 

 

 

 

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This is

 so enchanting, so humbly composed. I haven't the words to express the way it makes me feel. It's wonderful :)

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Ethereal Mornings

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my piece.  I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. 

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Touchable Write

That sun is magic, the cloud mystical, the moment of tactile memory precious - heart warmth exudes from this one - Lady A


 

 

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ethereal morning

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