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Lustful Dreaming.
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Erotica/Passion A dream covered and smothered in untamed lust
Where the beast is released in barbarian trust
And unchaste thoughts follow an erotic beat
Wild and beguiling in the savage heat
The animal in me is tied wickedly tight
In such heavy bondage one cannot fight
But the restraints will only last for so long
And again you will hear the passionate song
Of a choir of moans, And orchestra of sighs
Coveting hands on voluptuous thighs
Hungry kisses - an insatiable thirst
The deep dark craving; a blessing, a curse
loved this..it was good..you are a dreamer..
This poem is excellent, but the rhyme scheme fails in the last two lines (and only there). You could easily correct it by describing the craving as both blest and cursed, which would make a perfect (rather than an off-) rhyme on the word "thirst."
Starward
I actually thought this poem was pretty good. But I like erotic poetry xB so yeah.