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have you ever been someone

you never wanted to become

have you ever breathed in someone else's air

cause when you were out of breath it was there

have you ever felt someone else's pain

and drowned in someone else's shame

have you ever hurt so bad

that it destroyed all you had



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sorrow came to you as an uninvited guest

walked right in and put you to the test

and then before you knew it you were so depressed

you were hoping that this was your last breath

yeah you were hoping this was your last breath



you play the game and roll the dice

it's time now for you to pay the price

your talking to yourself to ease your mind

telling everyone who asks that your fine

but on the inside there is hurt so deep

that your eyes bleed whenever you weep

if only someone other than your tears knew

that there is a broken soul inside you

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have you ever been someone

you never wanted to become

and then when you tried to run

you were blinded by the sun

have you ever hurt so bad

that it destroyed all you had

and then you became so sad

that you couldn't even stand

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Karyn Indursky's picture

Love it. Maybe, you can have a career in writing songs. It seems to me that most artists don't write their own material. Good luck! With your talent, though, I don't know how much luck you need.

Dagger Strife's picture

Love it...Great poem.

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POWERFUL
AND I LIKED IT