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How you make me feel
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2004 every time you walk in
the room starts to spin
the ground starts to shake
feels like an earthquake
the stars begin to shine
in the sky one at a time
shining in your eyes
where all beauty lies
thats how you make me feel
thats how you make me feel
hey, i really like this, and love poems that i can relate to. however, i've learned through the past to be as original as possible, so not using cliche's. just trying to be constructive. :) good job.
Amazing poem, it tells me how you feel. Keep it up x
nice love lyrics...I know the feeling...Pam
i like your portrayal of feelings here. very nice. i love the way a certain person makes you feel. :D please critique the first chapter of my story "for the love of you" in my portfolio.