Ups and Downs

My love is good to me, i'm glad to say;

so fine and kind, so caring and sweet.

With eyes so blue, as blue as ever they may,

and dark, curly hair, long and indiscreet,

a heart so pure, a soul so heaven-bound!

The only gift is love; the dream of peace,

of good times coming and love to abound,

comes alive in that embrace - such release!

But that wit is poor; that laugh is nervous.

i can find someone better if i look,

someone spiritual or sensuous,

smart and kind without being by the book.

Alas, with this one i seem very stuck,

and God has not yet sent to give me luck.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

About my ex-boyfriend before he stopped writing to me.  I don't really like this one now.

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Vera Nix's picture

Wow, I really like this one...it's an excellent twist in every way.