No loss greater than this....

The loss of a unborn child
is much to bear,
It is hard to keep going,
to keep on even to care
It seems impossiable to
keep going strong
when the feeling is that
you did something wrong
The world keeps crumbling down
all around you
the pain , the sadness the crying
is all you feel and can do
Let someone in to help
you he is right their
though he might not understand
He still deeply cares
It is the hardest thing
for a woman to go through
To loose a unborn child
that was apart of you
Time will ease the pain
and sorrow you feel
although the memory and scar
will never heal
God will give you strength
to get through this unfortunate event
For God needed an angel ,
and yours was sent .....

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Written to all the woman who suffered a loss of a child unborn or living .It is unfair to have such a loss and it by hardest thing a woman can go through ..
My thoughts and prayers to all of you whom went through such pain .....

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armystrong's picture

Thank you very much

I just read your poem. many beniciones to you. many many bendiciones to you. Thank you for writing this for me, it means so much you would do this. Blessings to you and your family!


-il mondo è così bello quando si smascherare tutto il male che si nasconde sotto

facethetruth2b's picture

Blessing to you and your

Blessing to you and your family also.. Keep your head up and your faith alive yu will be blessed with a beautiful child ...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

HisWithNoDoubt's picture

This is so true. Not even the

This is so true. Not even the dad leaving right after can amount to that.

CRIS's picture

So aptly said...No words can

So aptly said...No words can ever describe the pain of losing a baby- that's how i felt then and until now, the pang of pain is still here. Finding someone who can empathize, even with the slightest of words somehow lift the gloomy feeling one feels when the memory of pain is remembered. Thanks for the poem.

facethetruth2b's picture

NOthing can ever take away

NOthing can ever take away the pain of loosing a child ..I felt the feeling and nothing will ever ease my troubled heart from the loss. Thanks for reading and commenting..


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

SSmoothie's picture

Amen. HugSS

Amen. HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

thisisme789's picture

This was very beautiful, and

This was very beautiful, and I truely enjoyed it! I may not have lost a child that was inside of me, but it makes me think about my baby sister, Jessica, who has joined God in heaven.
Beautiful write!


<3

facethetruth2b's picture

Thanks thisisme , always a

Thanks thisisme , always a pleasure having to se ur comments.


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

thisisme789's picture

No problem!

I like seeing yours too! =)


<3

SoulShadow's picture

This was written with love.

This was written with love.