To act like this

Is this what you wanted to see,
The words "HATE ME" carved into me ?
Did you like the fight we were in,
Do you think loving me is a sin?
The words hate, betrayal and fail.
stick out like a sore thumb,
You call my writting weak and dumb.
It's okay though when you say,
I am sorry when you act that way.
You take the cruel words you threw in my face,
You take them and swallow the bitter taste.
I amtired of going back in the past
I ask you leave them their at last .
But do you ? No I would have to say
Their is no need for us to act this way .
I loved you before , I love you now
Just let me know when and how
To let it be and forgive each other.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I.D.K , only if you knew ...Maybe the title does not fit , let me know your thoughts....

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SoulShadow's picture

This hits home to me. Ur

This hits home to me. Ur words definitely express ur feelings.

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Thanks

Thanks


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

Tormented1's picture

The title works with it.. and

The title works with it.. and I have felt that pain Definitely can relate <3 keep it up


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Thanks a bunch .....Loving

Thanks a bunch .....Loving your work also.. Very detailed and alot of feeling....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Wow! An awesome heartfelt

Wow! An awesome heartfelt write! Many can relate to this! I like the title! Great work!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Thanks I will add more to it

Thanks I will add more to it once the red bull gives me my wings and I can zing ....


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

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Love redbull!

Named my blue dog redbull! No joke fam tries to change it to rebel, but he won't come to it, only redbull! ;) smart pup 10 months old! What a superstar!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am