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"FUCK" & "SHIT"

Sin and vice
Destroy beauty
"Fuck" and "Shit"
Have defamed English!
(Wrltten and posted by Muhammad Naveed Ahmed/Emmenay on August 07, 2011).

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last updated 7 August 2011 - 5:14pm
©7 August 2011 - 5:13pm — emmenay
9 August 2011 - 12:33pm — palewingedpoetess
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Okay maybe it wasn't Haiku exactly..............

but it sure sounded funny to say fuck and Haiku in the same sentence you have to admit that................. do pardon my using that word twice in these last two critiques lol.................in other words don't spank me for being so bad...............ha ha. cause if you do.........................( shrugs shoulders and throws hands up in the air).................okay, okay no further comment.................

9 August 2011 - 12:30pm — palewingedpoetess
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GAPES ASTOUNDED!!!!!!!!!!!!

To think YOU who hates these vulgar words are using them in a poem YOU WROTE. I'm speechlessly stunned and wholly dumbfounded who but you would have thought to pen fuck in a Haiku............Most impressed sir poet even if I am knocked on my Lily white fanny feeling so! grins like a heathen. Note after I got over the initial shock I did love the poem and got what you meant entirely. This was your literary punch in the nose for those who use such vulgarity in their poetry am I right?
now tell me, what do I get for being right? winks broader...............
you know who!...........so why type it?.....................