Don't A Hole

 

 

                                                  Don't A Hole

My skin is black, I don't lack the knack

for soul in a bowl.

I like black hole, brown hole cajole.

My hair is nappie, it makes me all nore happy

My nose is wide that coincide with the great devide

My blood is blue, I wana do you

Make a brew say you

I ask of you,kangaroo,

Pas de deux.

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DesertDreamer's picture

I hate to be a Grammar Nazi,

I hate to be a Grammar Nazi, but in line #4 you put "nore" and I believe you meant "more", also in line #5 you spelt divide like "devide" when it is spelled "dIvide".

 

Sincerely,

A Grammar Nazi trying to be polite.

 

P.S.

It's a great read otherwise.


~~We can fade away together one dream at a time.~~