I hope you can hear me my love.

I love you dearly and i hope you can hear me
I want to be yours with every fiber of my beating heart.
My heart belongs to you, and i want not to be used.
Please dont make me suffer anymore cruel abuse.
Dont let it be cut, dont let it be bruised, dont let
my love for you be nothing more then a use.

I trust you so completly, so fully, so true,
for i would not know what to do, if i lost you.
My heart would be crushed, beaten, and torn,
my love would be nothing more then a evil scorn.

My eyes wish to look into yours
and tell you every feeling and every
thought inside my heart and mind,
every secret,every tale, every story
that my heart and soul has prevailed.

My heart wishes to beat against yours
to tell you everything that i feel for you.
To show you how my love, is ment to be,
for only one and thats you my sweet.

I hope to make you see, and help you relize,
I hope to make you feel, and understand
my feelings, my love, and my heart
belong to you, as they have from the start.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

To my man, I hope you know who you are. :)
I love you and only you. I hope you know it.

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SSmoothie's picture

Wow! elfy! Wonderful write! I

Wow! elfy! Wonderful write! I looked in your folio it seems I have a lot o catch up on! This just has me blubbering! Sentimental fool that I am, can't find the magical word this needs to describe it justly, an awesome simply wont suffice! HUGSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Elfy's picture

thank you smoothie always

thank you smoothie always glad to hear from you :) glad you liked it lol. Yes alot to catch up on, in time lol. hugs


-Elfy*

MatthewWayne's picture

So many of these poems to

So many of these poems to choose from, and my words fail to do any justice to the talent and skill you have with your words....
I've read just about every single piece you've wrote, and then some that you read to me. I have never doubted your talent, and still believe if you so choose you could go very far with your writing. It is a beautiful piece, one I will always remember.


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

Elfy's picture

Thank you, i know you've read

Thank you, i know you've read alot of my stuff and that im glad. Im not as good as you think. Thank you for reading.


-Elfy*

thisisme789's picture

Wow.

It's a beautiful write! I'm glad that Someone is making you feel this way =)


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