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Teen love.
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Old poems You and me dance under the sky,
Where only the angels and God can spy.
Above the devil all the time.
And the stars are our only light.
We dance real slow not caring who would no.
Not knowing who would see,
We laughed as we fell to the ground.
On the soft grass
We lay and kissed
Real sweet and load
Not caring who would hear,
cause its just you and me.
And that’s all I care.
Is that ur here with me.
this is now gonna be my
this is now gonna be my dream. lol this is all i could wish for right now
I wrote this my 9th grade
I wrote this my 9th grade year to jp. When we were dating. Lol. Good poem though.
-Elfy*
lucky i want this so bad!!!
lucky i want this so bad!!! :( but i dont want heart break but i am willing to go through with it if it means that i will be happy truely even if it is for a short time
Trust me, not worth heart
Trust me, not worth heart break. When it happened to me, jp was the only guy to dump me. Usally it's me dumping cause I'm tired of the drugs, and bs they put me through, or other reasons. Jp dumping me, was enough to make me want to drink again. And I mean, heavy drinking. That night, if not for my BFF steff begging me not to, and making me promise I wouldn't, after she lectured me about how it could put me In hospital cause of side effect of my meds, I would have drank a whole bottle of vodka that night.
-Elfy*
That's really sweet, and is
That's really sweet, and is quite cute!!
Grammar police time ;P : "On the soft grass; We lay and kissed; Real sweet and load; Not caring who would hear, ; cause its just you and me."
The ";"s are just to show that in your poem you had the next line started there. Where you have "Real sweet and load" It should be 'loud' =D and "cause its just you and me" The its should be 'it's'.
I couldn't help myself! .>.<.
Momo
<3