I'm your child

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Elfy

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We stood outside yesturday night,
And you stood by my side,
Telling me, it will be alright.

That one day, I'll be free,
The world will be, new to me.

That you will save me,
And take me away.

That life will be, happy,
For the rest of my days.

You told me,
How much I mean to you.
That I'm the daughter , you wish you had.
That I'm the one, who made you my dad.

That I make you so proud,
That you would shout out load.
That I make you smile,
Cause I'm worth while.

I'm your child.

9 January 2012 - 1:27pm — thisisme789

I really liked this! It's really sweet and touching!

9 January 2012 - 5:13pm — Elfy

Thank you, i think so too. Though its not that good, ill re-do it soon i hope.

-Elfy*

9 January 2012 - 5:14pm — thisisme789

I think it's fine, but okay! =D

9 January 2012 - 4:16am — BBran91

I enjoyed the tone and the style you presented. This is really good.

9 January 2012 - 11:23am — Elfy

Thank you. It was just something quick, so I'll prob re-do it later on lol. Its not one of my better ones. But I still appreciate the comment

-Elfy*