I feel like im in a daze

Today, I feel like im stuck in a daze.
My eyes, can see, yet they are blinding me.
My mind, feels trapped in a maze.
I try and try, but i cant escape.

My mind is wandering,
to places, iv never been before.
My eyes, can see, yet im looking lost.
My face is painted on with confusion, and unknown dispare.
I look at my face,and my body, i wonder, is anyone home?

I feel like my body, is floating, like my mind has been erased,
like im stuck with broken memories, and im getting lost in space.
My eyes are searching the air, for awnsers, yet They find none.

Where Am I Today? Does anyone know?

Cause i surely dont.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Im walking around and living, breathing today, yet I seem to not be here.
My mind seems, to have left.

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twisted_soul's picture

I'm like that alot, but with

I'm like that alot, but with other things, like am i good enough, or he looks like a stranger

Fitzgerald's picture

I really enjoyed this poem. I

I really enjoyed this poem. I felt the words you were putting out there.

Fitzgerald's picture

I'm sure all read more and

I'm sure all read more and post more on your poems. Keep it up

Elfy's picture

Thank you, im glad that you

Thank you, im glad that you did :)
Hope to hear, more comments from you!


-Elfy*

MatthewWayne's picture

I loved this poem :) the

I loved this poem :) the lines...

"I feel like my body, is floating, like my mind has been erased,
like im stuck with broken memories, and im getting lost in space.
My eyes are searching the air, for awnsers, yet They find none."

jumped out at me more than anything else, and I could not help but think about my expierence of going off my medication (zoloft) when I read your piece here.. as if you described exactly how I felt when I was withdrawling from the drug.


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne