Love has many seasons

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Love

Fall-

Is when school starts up again,
and he wakes up early, to walk me in.

Is when the cold front starts to leak in,
and he gives me his sweater.

Is when the leaves start to fall,
and we rake them togeather.

Is when halloween comes around,
and we dress up, like kids again.

Winter-

Is when its cold, and icy
and he gives me his jacket.

Is when he kisses my frozen lips,
and warms them.

Is when it snows,
and we through snow balls, and build snow men.

Is when christmas,
is us, around the tree, and new years spent kissing me.

Spring-

Is when we go for long walks,
and go to the park.

Is when our aniversary,
turns to 2 years.

Is when the flowers bloom,
and he picks me a few.

Is when we dream of a life,
far far away.

Summer-
Is when we strip the clothes off,
and go for a swim.

Is when we share,
some ice cream.

Is when we spend all day,
and night togeather.

Is when we party, like a rock star,
just you and me.

Till the school year starts in august and we start all over again.

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S74rw4rd's picture

Excellent poem.  The change

Excellent poem.  The change in diction, in the next to last line (from third person address to second person) is a little jarring, but does not detract from the poem's overall beauty.  Just change "you and me" to "him and me" and the whole poem runs smoothly and consistently.


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incovrs's picture

Seasons of love

I like how you describe the good things in life pertaining to the 4 seasons. Wonderful writing!!

thisisme789's picture

That's a very nice poem! It's

That's a very nice poem! It's different from your other style of poems (the layout, i mean) but I like it!


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MatthewWayne's picture

I like it! I must say the

I like it! I must say the layout is what caught my eye. it's different than your "normal" style so it makes this piece stand out more and wonderfully written.


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

Elfy's picture

lol thanks. Ya its a bit

lol thanks. Ya its a bit differant.


-Elfy*