Miss Who You Was

The missed time, the misuse, all my mistakes and I still miss you, I miss then, I miss us, I wish I knew then feelings was never going to be enough. I still love the person you no longer are, a miss placed look in your eyes tell me your not her, I touch your skin, kiss your lips, your not the same person and I'm not even sure I knew you then. I miss our time, I miss our misuse, with all our faults I'd still fight for you. . . you and god both know I never stopped trying too. Who you was made the world a better place but I changed that, who you was trusted in love but I changed that too, who you are was the reason you came back but I can't let you. . . You and god knows I want too. . . I still miss you, who you was.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Enjoy been busy but hope some can relate 

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SSmoothie's picture

How can anyone miss this? Not

How can anyone miss this? Not easy to do repetition well but you nailed it

! Great post! 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

Thanks, it take more time to

Thanks, it takes more time to do a poem with a repetitive word or words but every now and then I can wrote one worth a damn

"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

allets's picture

Where U Been?

Good write. ~allets~




Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

I'm sorry miss allets, my

I'm sorry miss allets, my mentor passed, and the up tick of people in flue season means I can through myself at work. Nice to know I'm missed :)

"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin