Letting Go Of Everything

Letting go of every feeling feels good when you've got nothing left to lose, I knew this when I lost the choice to choose, like kicking the chair because you burden the noose

 

Breaking's was never an option but I fell apart all the same, faking everything because it's easy when truth becomes to much weight to bear, if I let go of everything could I disappear

 

Who cares who's right anymore, who cares who walked away first, we all fall apart the same when we let go of everything

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Complex is the basic understanding of someone else

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Death_from_a_kiss's picture

This poem, really hit home

This poem, really hit home for me. I don't know your circumstances, but I know mine. In my opinion, you're right, sometimes letting go is the only option. I enjoyed reading this.

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

Thankd

This was a quick piece in the moment glad you can relate, and yes I also feel sometimes letting go is the only option, however as the fellow down below said, (and I'm only speculating his mean) memory can keep you from ever letting go.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

Death_from_a_kiss's picture

That is true, but letting go

That is true, but letting go doesn't mean forgetting. It simply means understanding. (I know easier said than done)

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

Very true, letting go doesn't

Very true, letting go doesn't have to mean forgetting.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

czjustanemptyhead's picture

Dude this is a strong piece,

Dude this is a strong piece, in our lives we find having to make those decisions and bear the wieght isnt the place we want to be yet in someway we all find ourselves there from time to time. Good work my friend

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Thanks Man

Yes and I wish you better moments in that aspect then my own friend lol glad you enjoyed.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

SSmoothie's picture

Impossible task to let go me

Impossible task to let go me I send it to the source tied on a string works for me out of sight out of mind if you get lucky :) nice thought interlude 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

Letting go is sometimes

Letting go is sometimes unavoidable if moving forward is to ever happen, this piece was based on a time I was left with that decision and found no other option but I'm always open to constructive input and hope you liked the piece.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

SSmoothie's picture

Yes I did except a few minor

Yes I did except a few minor twig snaps :) you don't let go. You just let out more slack on th string till you can't see it anymore...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."