When A Angel Loves A Demon

I never did see her cry, she told me I was everything she ever wanted, in the end we both just wanted to say goodbye, she was so fucking beautiful, a goddess on the outside 
 
I can't stop saying "what if" what if I had, what if all it took was one word, looking back its no surprise I wanted her so bad it hurt, I didn't know myself, but I didn't second guess the heart I was eager to let her hold 
 
She was an angel lusting for love games, I was a demon hoping she would share her wings 
 
But we didn't know love made us one and the same from two different worlds and a love like holding a candle in the rain 
 
One story that two lovers writ, an angel and a demon one took a fall and the other took a hit it was no surprise that one fucking quit, how could they not see, blinded by a love so beautiful that both where left asking was it me 
 
I can still hear her say "letting you go hurts worse then the deepest cut you ever left. I'm not letting you go because you're gone, I'm letting you go because I'm the only one still holding on."
 
 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

This one was written sometime ago, I updated and changed itm hope you enjoy!

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Death_from_a_kiss's picture

This poem is very deep, and

This poem is very deep, and makes think back to my once fallen angel for who's wings i plucked... very emotional...

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

So true

Oh man I understand completely, I too tore down something beautiful, "plunking her wings puts it perfectly" that mistake will forever be a learning curve.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

"I'm letting you go because

"I'm letting you go because I'm the only one still holding on" No words...this is amazing!!!


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

Thanks always make me feel

Thanks always make me feel accomplished when a part of my poem can relate to someone, it means they understand the emotion behind it like I do. 


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

czjustanemptyhead's picture

Strong emotions flowing

Strong emotions flowing through this piece. Thought provoking, poingient, and a very good write. It was a pleasure to read this man.

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

As are yours my friend, glad

As are yours my friend, glad you enjoyed.


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

KindredSpirit's picture

I do like it

KS

Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

Thanks glad you do

Thanks glad you do


"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin