Notes on a Memo pad

Ideas & Revisals

Do I want to know
What you are thinking?
Do I really need to know?

The words unspoken,
Cause a fall
of feelings
Through my chest.
A flight reaction
What you want me to give...

Its precious what I've got
And precious what you could give
Do I really want to know?


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Doddles on a notepad to round out one day

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allets's picture

Nice lines

"Fear/ a flight reaction..."

Condensed emoting~nice poeting.





djtj's picture

Thnaks again

Sometimes I dont know what Im saying Just what I am feeling.  Thats for the insights.