Talented future stacked up in a box,
She plays her cards closely,
Keeps challenging the clock.
Recently shuffled,
As God had intended,
They fall in ordered sequence,
The universe had amended.
Old Version
Talented future stacked up in a box.
She plays her cards closely,
Keeps challenging the clock.
They fall in ordered sequence,
Just recently shuffled,
As God had intended,
As the universe had amended.
Enchanting Rewrite
Enjoyed the metaphors of time and future. - Lady A -
Glad you liked it but
I still cant get a handle on the second part I liked the opening but it doesnt intrigue me like some of my others...