Card Game

Talented future stacked up in a box,

She plays her cards closely,
Keeps challenging the clock. 

Recently shuffled,

As God had intended,
They fall in ordered sequence,
The universe had amended.

 

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Talented future stacked up in a box.

She plays her cards closely,
Keeps challenging the clock. 
They fall in ordered sequence,
Just recently shuffled,
As God had intended,
As the universe had amended.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reworked a poem I dont really like Reworked again 2025

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Enchanting Rewrite

Enjoyed the metaphors of time and future. - Lady A -


 

 

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Glad you liked it but

I still cant get a handle on the second part I liked the opening but it doesnt intrigue me like some of my others...