Tidal Motion

My breath stops.

And I hold it through the feeling.
Feeling you close,
I let it go.
There's an aura

Surrounding,
Resounding,

Through me
In me, around me. 
I'm so filled with completeness
That, my body falls limp
Before you.
Ah!  

 

Loneliness escapes
Back into his shadows
The light you bring me

Beats it from my breast.

 

And then the tenderness begins.
Soft, and shallow, fast and deep,
Hold me,
Let me go.
There's a sweetness

surrounding us,
Resounding us,
In each breath
In each kiss
The promise of completeness
That I fall limp
Before you
Ah!

 

Surrounding, resounding,
Love is a shared emotion
Caught in tidal motion,
Love 

Ahhhhh

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The Ahhhh's are more of an intake of breath as when your lover catches you in a surprise of senses and then that slow release...

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Ernest Bevans's picture

...Aaah - YES!

Butch Lesley's picture

I'm not one to give detailed critiques so this one will be easy fore me because I can critique it in one word...Ahhhh